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He thought his heart, cold and dark,
Could not let in single ray of light
But she appeared
Like a gust of wind in a valley of sunflowers
And he loved her, and could not tell her
"Do not turn away from me like the others.''
And she stayed
And looked fondly
And touched softly
Among the golden sunflowers, tall as the sky
"I love you." It suddenly slips out from him
Her astonishment, blush, shortness of breath
Will she reject him after hearing the scared thumping
Of his heart?
He turns away, to flee
"Wait, I love you too ...''
And the heart's ice melted, the darkness gave way to light
A hug, a kiss, a desire
And suddenly a piercing sound, tearing his heart open
A gunshot
Time stood still, he stands motionless
Can happiness be so fleeting?
Her lifeless body like a marionette whose strings have been cut
A trickle of blood on her chest blooms like a rose
"Kiss me, do not go! Do not leave me alone with this love!''
But she no longer hears
She has gone away to the world of dreams and golden sunflowers
And only at night when he sleeps, and dreams about her,
That she says
"I love you, I love you, I love ..."
Whenever I attempt to write poetry, it ends up sad and/or depressing and/or dark. I don't know why, but it always happens.
Anyways, I had to write an erotic type poem for my Polish school a while back, and this is what I wrote. It was a pain, because I wrote it originally in English, then translated it all into Polish, and then later translated it again into English into this final copy. Welp. I know what I'm NOT going to do next time. XD
But I'm really happy how it turned out.
Polish version is here:
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This poem was written with Russia from Hetalia in mind, but it can really be about anyone. It is kind of based on the fanfic 'Russia X Reader: Kiss It All Better' by Chiarochi, now ponru. Here's a link to the fic, you should really check it out:
[link]

Hetalia (c) Hidekaz Himaruya
Russia X Reader fanfic (c) Chiarochi
Poem (c) me
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sherlockholmes34 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
I really like this poem. Nice job.
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Protokol-Rose Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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sherlockholmes34 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Your welcome. You may know me as a friend of mythgirl68 would you mind reading some of my work.
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Protokol-Rose Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Yes, she's told me about you. I wouldn't mind at all, I'd love to read some of your work!
And thank you for watching me.
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sherlockholmes34 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Your welcome, you are very talented. I think you would like some of my army stories. Devil's Rage is a nice place to start.
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Protokol-Rose Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Thank you very much, yet again. And sure, I'll start there.
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sherlockholmes34 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Your welcome again. Do you think you can read today. I have quite a few army stories and you can always read the Rp me and my mythgirl did together.

Also what has she said about me? Be earnest I wont' mind.
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Protokol-Rose Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
I unfortunately can't today, I still have a lot of schoolwork to do for tomorrow, but I promise I'll get to reading it as soon as I have time. Yes, she's offered to show me it as well, and I must say I'm intrigued by it.
And she's just told me how great of a writer you are, and that you RP with her. And that I should read some of your works.
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FleetastheWind Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh wow... I love the analogy of the sunflowers, really amazing imagery! :heart:
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Protokol-Rose Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
Thank you, I'm glad you like it!
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FleetastheWind Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I love it! It feels like it has such a light, happy atmosphere til the end and all the sudden it's gloomy and sad and emotionful and wonderful and and and... just amazing!
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Protokol-Rose Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
Yeah... *scrathes neck ruefully* All of my poetry seems to do that for some reason. I'm glad you think it's amazing, my teacher managed to point out flaws in every single line when I handed it in.
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FleetastheWind Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh, I hate it when teachers do that! I'll hand in an essay which I think I did well on, then when I get it back it's chock full of mistakes and crossed out stuff in red pen. :( Some teachers just like to shoot people down, in my opinion!
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Protokol-Rose Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
My teacher is just like that! I think shooting people down is her hobby or something. She's just so good at it...
Luckily, she's not my teacher anymore, so yay!
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FleetastheWind Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Ah, ya see, I've got the rest of the year... no wait, two years! 0.0 I have two years with my shooty-downy teacher! Save me...
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Protokol-Rose Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Oh, goodness. I feel for you. I would save you gladly if I could, but all I can offer for now is 'Good luck' and 'You can get through it!'
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mythgirl68 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was going to say that every poem you write becomes dark, but great writing nonetheless. ( Eek, I almost wrote nonetheless in Latin!)
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Protokol-Rose Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
No, but it's true! Remember during our poetry unit in Clark's class we were writing Haiku's and I was writing about like flowers growing? And then the last line was that they were growing on a grave?
But thank you very much! (How is nonetheless in Latin?)
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mythgirl68 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, do you remember the poem about the unicorn? Didn't it die at the end?

You're welcome and it's tamen.
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Protokol-Rose Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
Oh, right! That one! I wrote that as well, didn't I? Yeah, it did die in the end.
Ooh, sounds cool. Kind of like ramen (noodles- those things are sooo good...).
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mythgirl68 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
And did you write it or did you never get too?

It's one of the few words I know on sight in Latin. ( okay, that's not true, but still.)
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Protokol-Rose Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
I think I started it, but never got to quite finish. Or I did. I don't remember.
What's horse? Do you know that?
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mythgirl68 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think you finished it.

And it's equus.
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Protokol-Rose Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
Yeah, most likely not.
Oh, right! I actually knew that, had to research it a while back.
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